Assignment 6
Sydney Harbour bridge
Anyone looking for something extra-special place for take a lover to visit. This place called 'Sydney harbour bridge,' Iocated in Sydney, Australia. Sydney harbour bridge is top place of telling love. At night, there is interested for tourists because it’s decorated with lots light and glitter. Surround this place has many beautiful restaurants for wanting to eat dinner There is large area enough for visiting of many tourist.

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