Assignment 4
The love of the warm mom
This is the picture of beautiful mother and her cute daughter. The mother is soothing her daughter to cry from sound of plane.
The beautiful mother who wears short-sleeve white T-shirt and jeans with her fair complexion is Lisa. She has long straight brown mocha hair and pointed nose. She is well-build of 32 years. Lisa is a creative novelist, she can writing various varieties. For example short story, novel, non-fiction, fiction, and poetry by herself. She is diligent woman because she cleans house everything by herself. However, she good at cooking, she cooks American food, Thai food, Japanese food, and sea food. That’s why she looks cool.
The little girl is Lucy who is very cute of her five months. Lucy has fair complexion, nice straight brown mocha hair and chubby cheeks. She is very intelligent girl because she learns from her mother very fast. In addition, Lucy is a good daughter for her mother. For instance, she will eat by herself when mother is busy. Both person are very perfect mother and perfect baby.

Your writing is great. I give you 8 points.
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ตอบลบYour story is interesting. i give you 9 points.
ตอบลบThis paragraph is good,I'll give you 9 point
ตอบลบYour paragraph is ok,I can understand. 8 point.
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